George, nice job taking those pictures above. I actually think that the second one is better than the first. The positioning is correct and you did a better job of adjusting the contrast and saturation. Keep up the good work.
A group of us got together for a fashion shoot last Saturday at my place. Two photographers and four models. Initially we had no idea what we'd be doing other than taking a few shots on my stairway.
This was essentially an "unplanned" shoot and things were pretty much decided "on the go" and we'd adjust the lighting to suit each "shoot." It's always interesting to see how shooting "styles" differ from one photographer to another. For example, this is my shot.
And then this is a shot by the other photographer, Erik
Same model but different dresses, completely different look and feel. I was going for the "Hollywood starlet" feel while he was going for a modern fashionista look/feel. We both used different setups as far as strobes and lightboxes goes. It really can create a dramatic difference in feel/look when you start throwing in shadows vs lights.
With the same model, I had her go outside and used natural lighting. The only editing for this one was to remove the strap that was showing as well as add a bit of lighting to the model while darkening the background a bit.
Here's an example of how adding a bit of an angle coupled with focusing the light on the model can really create a dramatic feel.
For this image I had a "grid" setup where I'd put a grid screen on the strobe coupled with two strobes with a colored gel in the background. This created a "red" effect for background effect. This really highlighted the focus on the model itself.
I'm still learning about photography when it comes to fashion models so I'm learning as I go along.